Thursday, March 27, 2014

Reflection



Reflection

1-    From the reader of my essay draft I gained confidence about my story which is my personnel experience.
2-    The Change I made in my draft after my reader feedback is that I brought many details to the story.
3-    Having somebody else read my writing gave me a different perspective on my writing By encouraging me to improve it and make interesting.
4-    What surprised me in having somebody else read my essay is that I had to say more in my story.
5-    My thought is that the fact to have somebody else share your personnel experience story can not be a problem.

Friday, March 7, 2014

assignment on a memoir



Venance Agnero
English 1101-015
03/07/14

                                                     Memoir of John Mc Gahern
In his book, the writer relates his life at his early age with his family, which therefore for me, is a story of his coming age.
In his book, John Mc Gahern describes the place of his childhood through those terms and phrases such as:’’The soil in Leitrim is poor, underneable is doub, a blue-grey modeling clay, a compacted gavel, the fields between the lakes are small, ash, blackthorn, alder, sally rowan, wild chery, green aok, syncamore, the lanes that link them under the iron mountains are narrow.’’
Through that description, the writer gives me the image of a suburb or village where he grew up. In his story, he also relates how he had an amazing childhood, specially his first years of school, when he says:” I don’t think I learned anything at school, though I had a copybook I was proud of. I was too young and spoiled, and spoiled further by the older girls who competed in mothering me during the school breaks.”  Through his story, the writer reminds me those wonderful times I had in my childhood.
The ideal audience for this book is the reader and specially who will be attracted or interested by that story as much as it can remind to the reader his pass.  
The specific scene in his book is his life when he was three years old, the writer says:” we lived with my mother, our grandmother, and our grandfather in a small bungalow a mile outside the town and our father lived in a barrack twenty miles away. “
His childhood remember me about  mine, I was living with my mother in my village, I lived there with my grandmother and my grandfather, my mother’s parents. My father was living in the city, mother also was living in the city, but my mother was spending more times in the village I thought because she was always there.
So Mc Gahern story is similar to what I could write as memoir of my life before my fifth years old.
The writer put specific description and details on his scene such as “bungalow and barrack”, to teach us that he did not come from rich family, but poor. That scene is important to the writer, because this is where he came from.
As change in his story, the writer’s father remarried after being single for years, fact that was surprising to writer’s uncles and parents.
I learnt from that memoir that, writing a memoir requires deep details of the story. The writing has to be free, nothing has to be private or hidden if it is a part of the story. This is the way the writer can have more intension from the readers for his story. People are more fascinated by a story when it deeply told, when it displays all aspects we can imagine, which gives a beauty of the story. So writing a memoir is to write about your pass in whole or specific part of your life in whole.

Sunday, March 2, 2014

motivation



Venance agnero
English 1101

Motivation is an act of determination in doing something. People are motivated by the wiling of reaching their goal, and that goal can be financial, or anything else.
Students are motivated by the wiling of having their degree in order to have good job and more successful in the society.

transation and simplicity



Venance agnero
English 1101

Zinsser in the chapter transaction met another writer Dr Brock, with hom he talked about the work of writing. And in the chapter simplicity, as the word says, Zinsser talks about how simple can be a writing, to have its readers be more interested in the reading. A writing has to be simple to not be boring when reading.